Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Destroyed By Peter F. Martin Analysis

Summary:
Martin in “Destroyed” addresses the issue of people doping and using mind enhancers and what effect those have on the game and the players. Martin believes that the pureness of sports has been lost, but that the sport’s rules are not the primary issue at hand. The issue that people should be most concerned about is the health of the users and what effect it has on their life now and in the future.

Paraphrase of Paragraph Ten: 
Mind enhancers such as doping and steroids are a risk to the original point of sports. They contest the principles and standards of those who created the sports, from the Greeks to early Olympians who had official competitions. The drugs make the sports less humane. However the main issue is not that of the fairness and purity of sports, it is that of the athlete competing in them. Newscasters, fans, and commentators are disheartened at the loss of the original concept of the games; but when will everyone care about the loss of the health of the athletes? (Martin 582)

A Stand Out Quote:
“Athletes—those who dope, who take steroids, who cheat—are victims of far more serious maladies than their sports.” (Martin 582)

The reason that I chose this quote is because I believe this was a turning point in Martin’s essay as far as what the true issues of performance enhancers are. In the essay Martin began discussing how the enhancers affected the morale and the purity of the game. In paragraph nine, Martin alludes to the issue that enhancers are not only effect the game but the life and safety of the players. This was what I perceived to be Martin’s main point of the essay. 

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